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"You Did Ask (pt. 2)"
  by snugasaglove
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ressurection by Shakez P.


Talkin Out The Side Of Your Neck - Cameo


Shakez P. Monday,
Aug 18, 2008
(08:42 PM) exscuse me miss.... could you plz give some insight to my write---Ressurection--- i truly appreciate it


There once was a BITER named "Will Shakes"
And when he can't write his own poems, other people's quotes he takes

Such plagiarism probably rocked the grave of the REAL Shakespeare
But when he got caught, he thought to shift and change his gear

By offering a weak, half-assed apology, he thought punishment would be deflected
Then, Admin "disabled" that account. So now he's "Resurrected"

Perhaps one day, he'll find something at which he can excel
But, for now, poetry aint it and he damn sho can't SPELL

Oh, he'd like to make you believe that he walks with head high, full of self pride
But how can that be if when the kitchen gets too hot, he runs off to hide

Yet he still tries to maintain his "hard" facade by any means he can
But he's really just a little boy...................pretending to be a Man.

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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (02:43 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  LiquidFire
10/01/08 (12:39 PM) 
*lookin crazy* now howd I miss this one? Lol. N that's just sad *shakes head*

  after vision
09/18/08 (06:32 PM) 
this is a very nice write .. deep and nice

  Pete Alma
09/05/08 (09:18 AM) 
GOODNIGHT Snug, I think someone's pride will be damaged by this piece. I truly understand the title. Call it for what it is.

  jerl
09/04/08 (05:54 PM) 
Woowee! Some poem, cute and to the point. Hmmm !

  Syndel
09/04/08 (05:09 PM) 
oh wow .........

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