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"You Do Me First"
  by Cryssy-Rashad


**THIS IS NOT MENT FOR EVERYBODY JUST THOSE COMMENT HARASSERS, I JUST GOT BACK ON GS TODAY AFTER 3MONTHS AND THIS CRAP IS STARTING ALL OVER AGAIN SO I AM JUST VENTING PLEASE EXCUSE ME** LOL
GS was my place to relive stress.
Somewhere I could lay low and avoid drama and mess.
There was always someone who had written something I could relate to
Yes GS was my second home to escape to.
After a while things started to become unlike what they used to be.
Out of nowhere things stop being about poetry
Poets only started to care about popularity & created beef.
So I put the pen down for a few months until this foolishness ceased.
Today as I logged in thinking that all rivalry was over by now
That the members had found their sanity
That I could read others work & write with relief.
Yeah right the joke was on me.
I wasn’t even logged in five minutes yet
There were messages from members asking
Wait,
More like demanding me to,
“Read this,” “check out that”, and of course they promised to return the love…
Are you serious?
I see after three months nothing has changed.
I don’t do this for the popularity
I couldn’t care more or less if anyone read my work because I do this for me.
But just like you want feedback & support I do to.
But I’m not gonna beg or harass anyone to give it to me.
So maybe others will do the same.
I can’t believe I just returned and the situation has gotten worse.
Its like the comments & fame is what they live for
Like a dry mouth begging to quench its thirst
But never return the favor after my deed is done
Like having sex with a selfish person who’s only concern is to cum first
So since it seems like some of you wanna fuck over everybody
We can make this comment thing like getting head
I’ll do you, if you do me first.

Go Hard (Instrumental) - DJ Khaled Ft. Kanye West & T-Pain
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Date Submitted: Mar 28, 2009 (03:03 AM)
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  Sigmatic
06/05/09 (12:30 AM) 
I dig it. Everybody goes through that. I like the flow, i like the concepts, but i really like the title. i can't lie my mind was in the gutta so yeah. You have a awesome way with words keep it up ten stars.

  Ordained2Chang...
04/09/09 (11:58 AM) 
Oh wow... you should've put this on the front page... People need to see it... You didn't pull any punches... And why should you?

  Tragic
03/30/09 (09:55 PM) 
i have this same problem!! and u hate it, i hate it, we'll be great friends, u do me first and i'll do you back!! lol.

  Da Darkest Ari...
03/29/09 (06:28 AM) 
u crazy lol man but hey thats sontrue i likenthe ending lol just like. i would have put it great write my poetic sista 1223372253828282541344 points lol

  touchdapearl2
03/28/09 (01:55 PM) 
this was real talk so I can fully understand indeed how you could feel this way...but I never stop coming i just stayed out of that mess...I even stop reading a few of my fav's because they had to joined in on the bullshit...but beside that I stayed here and continue writing...and that ending girl you are a fool for that make it like head aaahhhhaa,lol loved this write

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