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"You Fucked Me Just Rite"
  by InFamouZ1


Yes, Yes
give me more
I fucks with this shit
This BULL SHIT you've given me
A taste of reality
To what our hearts bring
I never give all the blame
Cause it always takes two in the game
From hurt to relief
And used to comfort
What more was need my heart you had that
I rich with gold inside and out
It pumped gold all through the body
From your past to my past we shared
To late nite tears
apologies, wise cracks, and sarcasim
to the untrusted and the trusted that got mixed up in the rumors
Late nites we chilled
The walks in the park
and life long conversations held through txt msg's
all gone cause you fucked me just rite
thanks for that nite

Though im over it or showing emotions like i am when im not your forgiven...

MY LAST POEM FOR GS...
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Date Submitted: Feb 10, 2008 (02:43 AM)
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  im luvin me no...
04/04/08 (03:28 AM) 
wow this was very deep and u were very angry and im sorry 4 what ever happened 2 make u that mad but i really hope u change ur mind about this bein ur last poem for gs coz i love readin your work...i agree that writin about ur problems helps a great deal i think my best writes come from my anger and pain and u have great talent so i know if u keep pickin up that pen and just let ur frustrations out ur writes will be better then ever...and i for one wouldnt want to miss out that greatness

  El Diablo
03/27/08 (01:14 PM) 
So I was really wonderin' why you aint on GS anymore, but it seem like the ppl who got me hooked onto GS have been disappearing lately...Anyway, just because I know a majority of the situation, I must say DAMN! this is one hell of a write. Its crazy how people can do such things that makes it harder and harder to move on. Madd Propz.

  candylickerlov...
02/10/08 (10:17 AM) 
YEAH!! I MUST AGREE THIS POEM WAS VAGUE!! BUT I UNDERSTOOD WHERE YOU WERE COMMING FROM MOS.DEF!!! DONT BE SO ANGRY! THAT'S WHAT MAKES YOU A BETTER PERSON! XOXOX!! MUCH LOVE!

  takeira
02/10/08 (10:04 AM) 
babeboi u betta NOT leave,dis poem wuz fa me n' u,10Starz Fav.Poem

  RoyalT
02/10/08 (09:17 AM) 
Yea i agree it was a little choppy but clearlyy you were angry when you wrote this,and your anger is what is forcing you to want to give up poetry,but dont!keep writing,trust me you'll solve your problems simply by writing about it...because of poetry im not as depressed anymore ,the crisp looseleaf page has absorbed my emotions...dont let this be the last let it be the start of a new beginning---promise me thatt--like make a pinkie swear with me or something lol----PRiNCE

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