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"YOU GET WHAT YOU GIVE"
  by smily


YOU DON'T BEHOLD NO WRONG UNTIL ITS DONE TO YOU
HOWEVER WHEN YOU ACCUMULATE IT BACK YOUR ANGUISHED ADDITIONALLY BLUE

DON'T TELL ME HOW I SHOULD FEEL OR WHAT I SHOULD NOT DO
I'M JUST GIVING IT ALL BACK TO YOU

YOU CONTINUOUSLY TRY TO MANIPULATE ME
BUT I AM NOT THE ONE

YOU HAVE NOT BEHOLD VOID YET
YOUR LIFE IN HELL HAS JUST BEGUN

I GRASP TWO WRONGS DON'T MAKE IT RIGHT
BUT I TRIED
I TRIED
I TRIED TO BE NICE

WHEN YOU WERE DOING ME WRONG, DID YOU THINK TWICE
DID YOU SPARE MY FEELINGS
WERE YOU EVER NICE

SO IN THE FUTURE, THINK ABOUT THIS
WHEN YOU DO PEOPLE WRONG
WRONG IS WHAT YOU GET
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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2009 (12:33 AM)
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  Successful
09/12/09 (05:22 AM) 
this was define and well spoken loved it

  big josh
09/01/09 (08:01 PM) 
wow. this was very interesting hmmm, you really go tme thinkin

  santiago\\\\\\...
07/31/09 (04:51 PM) 
o yea... givin' to much and not expectin' penance is suspposed to be the right thing to do.... heh tell that to somebody that lost it all....matierial and spiritual... nice piece ladii

  Reppin Bronx
07/31/09 (01:37 AM) 
This piece is just raw from start to finish perhaps i can relate it to the shit that is going down in my own personal life. excellent pieceput out with amazing depth..

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