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"You Lied"
  by PnutButta


You lied about ya status said you were rich
but your a bum
you lied about your intentions
said that I was the only one
You lied about your age saying that you were younger
for three years kept these lies and your spell i was under
Lied about your past, a history with a blemishes to say the least
Everyday we got closer to marriage
another secret was relased
or rather I'll say exposed,because you can't keep track of your lies
getting the details mixed up
then I pick up where you left of leaving you with the element of suprise.

You think i was not listening when you reiterated your tales of woe.
I believed your every word taking you for a friend not foe.
However you are the later a snake in disguise, had me fooled and even when i was not still my heart was paralyzed
I included you in everything
even if it was something unfamiliar to you
you said you wanted my all, knowing that a lot of shit I been through
so we took a ride on the pnuttbutta xpress,
you put me down everytime i would express,
express any doubt because your stories lacked truth
you would lie into my eyes proclaiming your true and undying love
a web of deceit, a liar a cheat
a phony, a fake
dealing, wealing dreams of deception
Deceptacon
conning your sorry ass through life
Pointing the finger at everyone else never thinking twice about the consequenses
well here is the deal
you can keep ya lies
I'll keep our son
you can have the apartment with all the furnishings
trust me I'm done
done with smiling all up in ya face
when i can't stand ya guts cause it's too much to take

keep taking ya viagra to satisfy ya hoes
they don't know u have a heart condition but if their worth the effort please keep on goin...
do what u want but you won't get this pussy no more
cause I'm moving on and walking out the door
your 37 years old pretending to be 29
i guess you had a midlife crisis early and now your approaching another boarder line
pathetic, but i won't let the memories of days gone by effect my future and here is the reason why
goin through the fire has crafted me to be the best
now i'll be a better person when i move on to the next
and you will be the same lame playin yourself like a fool
i guess that's what happens when you think your too cool
$ have nothing to loose.
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Date Submitted: Jan 09, 2008 (02:33 PM)
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  Rissa14
05/26/08 (05:51 PM) 
wow i like this piece alot..you put alot of emotion into it..and did your thing. it seems that you just put everything you had in this, your all and everything else. wow. from line one, to the last line, i was definitely hooked. you bought your a game..and sounds to me that you're wayy too good for this fool. you deserve better if someone if doing you wrong. its alot of emotions and anger in this piece..and i see why. very descriptive too. ten stars and a favorite. keep ya head up. xoxo &heart...
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  PanthaG
05/26/08 (12:23 PM) 
yeh..it's pretty sad when people pretend to be something they are not cause the truth always comes out in the end...one good thing about no longer being fooled by the "fool."...is that it's not you...you feel like letting the new "she" know & sometimes they start tripping because they think you want him back,,kinda like that song by Toni Braxton.....anyway..you got your own thing going...sky's the limit...he'll get what's due him..and you don;t have to touch a thing Sis...he'll meet his match an...
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  poetexcellence
03/12/08 (02:48 AM) 
Sis this is a very powerful write...it expressed the harshness of finding out the truth from a manipulative person and what happens when the truth is discover under such shady conditions..thanks for sharing this write with me and the rest of the gs community...def 10 starz...poet

  heaviness
01/13/08 (06:16 PM) 
whoa -- shit -- whoa -- you said it all ... 37 pretending to be 29 and having to take the V pill with a heart condition -- cheating life and death -- hell he's broke from the V pills -- you said it all poet

  williesidney
01/11/08 (05:41 PM) 
Nice write just keep doing what you are doing ten stars.

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