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"You Like Me..."
  by Angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem You Love Me... by Angel


He Loves Me-Lyzel In E Flat - Jill Scott

. . .

You

like me

You see past my past
straight through to the pain I try to repress
See mistakes made as mere humanness
and you don’t judge it
Don’t hold that information over my head
a hostage to be used against
You see me
(flaws and all)
my strengths and weaknesses
plain as day – a blaring sun
against which, most
would raise a hand to shield themselves

and yet…

you like me

Made of me, a thing of beauty
A thing to be carried around on the tongue
spoken of fondly – a friend
A companion
a homie
your lady, your baby
You made me… anew
In so many ways, you saved me
Practically raised me from a girl to a lady
Saw in me… shit I didn’t see
The first to read my poetry – to encourage me
to inspire me – and you,
so unlike me

yet,

you like me

Ventured off into new things in life
and stopped to invite me
to include me - to choose me
of all the people
you know
you chose… me
to share seasons and sunsets with
to sit and talk with
to hold hands
joke around.. and laugh a bit
you take… time and invest
cradle me to your chest
as the moon sits high overhead
and, you and I drift off into sleep
I rest my head atop your heartbeat – listening
to the sounds of my angel
a soul who genuinely

likes

me

. . .

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Date Submitted: Aug 23, 2009 (01:27 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  NyamhPoetry
09/03/09 (06:36 AM) 
aw this is so sweet! I'm glad you have this person =) and you write about it so beautifully, I have to favourite this

  Amayzn
09/03/09 (01:34 AM) 
that is a sweet and absolutely gorgeous piece written right here..

  DeeDee8908
09/03/09 (12:33 AM) 
THATZ BEAUTYFUL, THIZ'LL BE MY IDEAL POEM AFTER MEETIN SOME1 GENUINE

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