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"You"
  by Vocab Vixen aka InMyMindsEye
  - This Poem is a response to the poem YOU...... by Kenesu


You..

Captivate my thoughts to their fullest taking them away from others.
Hold my heart in your hands and may not even know that you do.
Have my emotions reawakening from their deep sleep blooming like the first flowers at spring.

Even tho depression takes hold of me , its only because some days seem harder without your smile, soothing words, and undeniable connection.
My mind ceases to be when i remember the way your lips move as you spoke, the way your voice sounds as you speak to me of just daily things, and how my body felt chills running through it just thinking of your hands running through my hair caressing me.

You..

Make my heart feel full and repaired, without a scratch or empty spot inside of it.
Frustrate me with some of your usual self, not realizing what goes through my mind with those things.
Can calm me down in a heartbeat when i do feel frustrated, even though your not fully aware of my reasons.
Make me wonder what more there is out there for me.

You make me smile and enjoy the fact that I am alive, that I was so lucky to have had You step into my life. You reawakened my heart and soul, and most importantly You reawakened my creativity.

~charity
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2008 (02:41 PM)
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  Kenesu
10/01/08 (05:27 PM) 
:), i love it, i truly do.

  Silk305
10/01/08 (03:57 PM) 
Very touching... deep thoughts greatly espressed. Nice write... 10

  lips.of.an.ang...
10/01/08 (03:38 PM) 
AWWWWWWWW thats sooo sweeeeeeet awwww :)

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