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"you need a freak and i need a second"
  by takeitsurius
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I NEED A FREAK by CONFESSION


I need a second to spend with you
a second to kiss your lips
slowly moving down do you feel my fingertips . . . tips. . . tips
goosebumps on your skin, head tilted back
i know you want it right now but you gotta wait a second for that
let me whisper in your ear and send chills down your spine
blow a soft breath on your neck do you think you can handle me yet?
you say you need a freak but what you need is someone sensual
you say you like it rough well wait til i put my dick into you
im parting your legs on this bed like god parted the sea
ill promise you pleasure that will make you call god to save you from me
you say you need a freak well i can sensually do that
can i place you on your stomach i like it better then your back
body pressed against the wall screaming and struggling you crawl your way to the top
juices soaking up the sheets feeling so good your screaming stop
i just need a second with you
to show you what sensual lovers do
ill make you wetter then ever before
make you beg "please baby no more"
but before i do i just need a second alone with you
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2008 (02:23 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/02/08 (11:56 AM)
Author: CONFESSION
Poem Title: I NEED......

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Jonathan Robin...
11/13/08 (10:47 PM) 
you're definitely an excellent master of your words. You choose from your heart which is softly spoken and you allow yourself to always be vulnerable. That's the mark of a true artist. Great job, my sister.

  CONFESSION
11/01/08 (06:42 PM) 
6 WORDS> DAMN IM WET BABY LETS PLAY LOVED THE WRITE BE LOOKIN 4 THAT RESPOONSE

  Bestever
11/01/08 (12:19 PM) 
I like how u structured this one... Love the way it was put together... Great write ma:)

  JustChuck
11/01/08 (04:09 AM) 
Very graphic without going overboard. Everything was rooted in sensuality along with a bit of a primal vibe.

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