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"You Need... ME!!!"
  by J skillz
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Need.... by "Hollywood"


Let me upgrade your fantasy
So real that you feel
Everything that happens in your dreams...
CUMS true

Like it...
So much that your pussy grows a heartbeat
Love it...
Until your clitoris grows vocal chords and stars screaming
Daddy... this-is-what-I-need
Crave it...
Until you feel a thousand little explosions
Erupting like landmines in-between your thighs

FUCK THE SWEET TALK...

You said that you were on top of the world... PLEASE!!!
I'll make you lose gravity
Lifts so high that you feel like you're on the moon
So deep inside you that I poke holes in your soul
SUPERSIZE ME...
Until my veins look like their going to explode
Lust for me...
Until sweat from your forehead drips into your eyes and it burns
Blurry...
IS IT A FANTASY?
No, because you feel my dick grow hands and tear your walls down
With every thrust
I head butt your G-spot until it cracks like a piñata
Feel your temperature rise hotter
Get wetter...
Go faster...
Grow wilder...

SHAKE...
While your toes curl and clinch the sheets
SHAKE...
While your fingers curl and clinch into my backside
Carve your initials into my skin
SHAKE...
While I redesign definition to your spine
SHAKE...
So violently that the neighbors think I’m committing a crime
RIGHT THERE...
RIGHT THERE...

FREEZE!

The muscles in your face contract
Your eyes open wide like you can't believe this is happening
Your mouth drops wide like words can't conceive what is happening
Its too good to be true
You love this feeling
GASP...
SQUIL...
GASP...
SQUIL...
GASP...
Like you're drowning in lust
DON'T WAKE UP
DON'T WAKE UP

I'M ABOUT TO CU........
Beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep, beep

DAMN...
It's your alarm clock
You wake up feeling bitter-sweet
BODY shivering and…
Still CUMMING...

You need… ME

This poem is a response to “I NEED…” by Hollywood.
©2008 Jamal T. Hinnant All rights Reserved.
© 2000-2008 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (07:40 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/23/08 (05:22 PM)
Author: DreamGurl
Poem Title: The Love Scene

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comment icon  COMMENTS (50)
  Ye Cre
08/14/08 (09:09 PM) 
BRAVO DAMNIT BRAVO...YOU DID THAT!! MAN I GOT TO GO LOL>>>>

  touchdapearl2
08/14/08 (06:10 PM) 
WELL DAMN....hell i need you! this was a raw seductive very sexy write and i enjoyed every minute of it,lol

  MizDuval
08/14/08 (06:05 PM) 
daaaaaauuuuuuum....i would be pissed off if that were me lol....i c u bruh u did tha damn thang on dis right here...hot and another fav....10 off rip

  smooch
08/14/08 (05:58 PM) 
shake shake shake damn dmna damn this was a good ass poem damn i aint even gonna comment on it enuff said already lol

  Change by fait...
08/14/08 (05:37 PM) 
hot homie

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