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"You never knew me....SC one line challenge...KGgg line"
  by Jj


You used to walk around, with the taste of me,
Still in your mouth, yet; you never knew me.
You loved to be seen, around town,
with me on your arm, yet; you never took the time,
To know me.
You used to love to pick me up, buy me nice things,
Thinking this was the key, in getting close to me.
You gave me a ring, expecting me to become your wife,
wanting me to stand at your side, how could this have worked,
If you never knew me?
You assumed i'd prefer the finer things,
instead of getting to know me, you spoke nothing of love,
using material wealth as your resort, when all I ever asked for
Is understanding, and communication.
You preferred deceit, and deception, never did you mention,
my love for reading or poetry, but how could you be expected to know,
When you never knew me? We spoke once of a family,
only because I stressed the issue, in wanting to know more of you,
Until I realized you will never know me.
You never spent the time, you'd rather spend money
trying to earn me, when time was all that was needed
To learn me.
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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2009 (03:03 PM)
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Date: 08/15/09 (03:05 PM)
Author: Group: Soul City
Poem Title: You never knew me......

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  MAVRICK
08/23/09 (02:18 PM) 
Whoa, hot, firey write, with conviction and attitude..Spicey ma-mahhhhhhh!!...haha...hey! truth is truth!...nicely stated

  Poetic Lyricis...
08/17/09 (09:26 AM) 
Reminds me of that ole saying "Money can't buy u love" and although the material things can be good but without love it's really nothing..loved the way you put it all on the table here..Nice Jj

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