GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Touch of Hope's PREVIOUS POEM Group: Psych Ward's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"you only like what you can see"
  by ***Dia-via-once'***


Why don't you like me
am I not pretty enough?
Thats not my fault.
Is it the way I dress ?
I can change that.
I can wear my pant tight
to make my butt look bigger
tight shirts and push-up bras
to make my breast look better,
Keep my hair done all the time,
cop the new, new kicks when they
come out ,live by lipgloss ,and
only wear my nikes once...
and then and only then will you
like me?
No sweety it was never
me you liked in the first place
you only like what you can see
you only saw outer beauty and
material things not everything
in this world is bling-bling.
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2007 (09:34 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 79  times
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 2 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
lock Log in to add this poem to your favorites.



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Lyrical Butter...
11/22/07 (04:57 AM) 
Very Beautifully written. It shows that you don't have to change yourself for someone to love you. They should love you for you 10 starz and a fav spot... So true And straight to the point. I really like... Keep writin Sis.

  momowilly
10/23/07 (11:11 PM) 
great write. a sentiment many can share. we can only be ourselves and the one who loves us will deserve us.

  Blessing
10/12/07 (07:05 PM) 
I luv this cuz thats truly how it iz in this world. Dats all most boys can see they just look thru your personality & only look at what you got on the outside. How long your hair is, your shape ,etc. 10 starz for this 1 mama

  jessika
09/11/07 (10:36 AM) 
i'm liking this a lot chicachick.....no man ever looks past the outside, except one and if ur lucky enough to find that one, lucky you...me personally i'm still looking. but really nice write gurl..ten stars and i'm defenitely favoriting this...xo<3xo

  Showcase
09/10/07 (04:07 PM) 
I feel you on this ma ma, such a powerful write you constructed here I love the message you brought fourth. keep the ink flowing(Tee)

Page(s): 1 
lock Log In to comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Touch of Hope's PREVIOUS POEM Group: Psych Ward's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy