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Lord Mason Da Rula You (Reverse Clarity Pyramid Style)
by Lord Mason Da Rula



You

"the person who I desire most"

laborious love I bare with
aimlessly hoping
for conclusion

where I can
possess
you


A Word

From

Da Lord

Mason Da Ruler
Copyrighted 2008
Diesel From Tha D Inc
© 2012 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
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Published: Mar 05, 2008 (12:03 AM)
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poem response  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 03/05/08 (12:55 AM)
Author: a fallen angel
Poem Title: u
Page: 1 


comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
03/22/08 (03:30 PM) 
I just wanted to read again

03/16/08 (05:23 PM) 
man, what can i say, if more folks understood that simple words in simple context can be as beautiful as a long drawn out thought. excellent piece. & i also see i'm have to once again, upgrade and change the flow up, lmao

03/05/08 (07:14 PM) 
pure beauty. hats off and lighters up

  Syndel
03/05/08 (04:05 PM) 
this is different but I like the layout very well done Mason new style fits you

03/05/08 (01:09 AM) 
I just wanted to show u some lov, for my appreciation of ur words , I hope it was appropriate , I'm trying to learn to write , I enjoy it so

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