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"You Said..."
  by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Mold will Hold by l0nnieugene



You said, "The mold will hold"
But other events did yet unfold
And so, my joy sank to grief
Just as Frost's last gold leaf
Did wither and die
When laughter waned to heavy sigh...

Yet, you said, "The mold will hold"
And so, I hoped it would still last
Even as I wondered in what medium, the frame was cast?
Was it of solid Iron, whole, seasoned, and seamless?
What mayhap caused the fissure? Perhaps, extreme stress
Upon its base?
I do yet ponder on what spasm
Caused the chasm in our case...

Yet, you said, "The mold will hold"
But was it made of clay?
Were the contents too heavy
And so, did, eventually, outweigh
Its form?
Could it just not... "weather the storm?"
Please, pray tell, what glue might seal it
So that together, we two might heal it
Is it, truly, irrevocably cracked, fractured and shattered?
Or did I wrongly think our "creation" was all that mattered?

But, you said, "The mold will hold."
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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2009 (06:54 PM)
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  big josh
08/21/09 (01:25 PM) 
wow , this was a beautiful response really enjoyed

  after vision
07/09/09 (09:22 PM) 
this is a wonderful write and class at the same time

  touchdapearl2
07/08/09 (11:36 PM) 
Just when I was about to leave my comment looked up and saw jamiah comment .....so true this is grown folks business right here...this was so well expressed!

  D.K Lord of Da...
07/08/09 (02:27 AM) 
Yet again my poetical soulmate brings forth another master piece...Strong deep and full of wisdom as only you can do..much love and respect dk

  BSavvy
07/07/09 (11:19 PM) 
This is such a sad write, I feel the hurt and confusion thinking it's one way when in reality it turns out to be something else. Nice show of emotions Snug.... Missed your pen....

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