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"You stole me"
A Debbie and love-is-the-life Collaboration


  love-is-the-life:

How can I forget
Times I go and run for a mile
Trying my best not to take my anger out on you
At times you make me smile
I never thanking you for making me happy
And at times, I run for a while
Why do I be having the same feeling
I do not know why
But I will get down to this soon
You stole me but then gave me away
I do not seem to understand at all

  Debbie:

Well baby let me tell you
As the world turns on its axis
You keep putting up this status
You thinking slash knowing I can keep up to expect this
But i\\\\\\\'m not giving up on you
I\\\\\\\'m still in love with you
That anger that you keep building up you will never be satisfied
How about me will i ?
Everyyhinh has change
Everything can\\\\\\\'t stay the same
Can we try seomthng new?
Lets sit and talk about this...

  love-is-the-life:

World is not existing
Life is a life
I can truly see in your eyes
How deeply in love you are with me
Babe, lets just all re-range
When you stole me
I was very glad
That I was your first
But will not be your last
Take me onto the dace floor
Babe, make me do the dance of tangle
or mangle
Because sometimes I do struggle
With your love
I will also be okay

  Debbie:

The first time I spoted you
I couldn\'t stop looking at you
B/c when i see a cute boy i cheese really hard
As days went on we kept catching each other eyes for a moment
Until we coudln\'t see each other in the distance of our moment
Its not so much that I told you
But you stole me too
WHen you made a committed choice
We are a couple
We leach each other by example
So how can you ever be ina struggle with my love ?
Baby you just have to learn the deep side of me
Then you and I wil be officialky complete
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Date Submitted: Oct 22, 2009 (05:04 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  ladiredd
10/26/09 (01:41 AM) 
wow this one was really nice and i liked the message that was being displayed...

  MZ.Philosophy
10/24/09 (10:16 AM) 
This was also nicely done..both of you really do work well together..its always good to do collabos with someone u can flow wit and when theres a connection even on a friend basis..nicee

  MZ.Philosophy
10/24/09 (10:12 AM) 
Both of you guys did a nice job..I liked it..Flow was hot..yall work good together

  Indispensable&...
10/22/09 (10:22 PM) 
you guys did a good job bouncing off each other... Great flow super HOT...LOVE is HOT... Bravooo.. MisSexy

  W_J_lyriC
10/22/09 (05:30 PM) 
This collabo was good. At times it was hard to follow because of the grammar, but the message came across clear. All in all it was a great write, it feels like something going on between the writers because I can see the emotion in this piece.

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