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"You Were There"
  by Crazy Baby


I cry for you big sister
After all these years I hated you
Wouldn't let me be me, downsizing everything I did
But I still care for you

You had me to look after
And 2 more under your feet
But having a sister like you
Sure makes things sweet

Mum wasn't there for us at time
And it surely got hard
But you made a decision
And let us in your heart

I know we didn't get along
But I'm trying to make it up to you
All the things I said and done
Big sister I still care for you

I know I'm different
Difficult at times
But you still loved me
Shows that love can be blind

I love you Big Sister
I could thank you every day
To my Big Sister
Please don’t ever change!
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Date Submitted: Aug 28, 2007 (08:54 PM)
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  mykah
08/29/07 (03:45 AM) 
aww thats beautiful hunny. you talk about your sisters often but i never know what the deal is with them...your writing is so great. and i know how much i love my big sister! it was so good...

  Star55
08/29/07 (12:42 AM) 
Awwwwww that was so sweet! I'm the youngest sibling in my family, so I know how that feels. There were so many times in my life where I hated my sister for different things, but then I stop and think, she's the only one that I have, and I put the problems behind. As a teen, I don't think i could have survived without her... she was there for me in ways that no one else could be. I loved her for it. Nowadays, we dont talk much (due to reasons which are bloody long lol) but I still miss her an...
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  Scriptixz
08/28/07 (10:27 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwww how wonderfully endearing!!! *smiles wide* i so felt this!!! i've got 2 younger sisters myself and boii do they get on my nerves sometimes! yea, like all older sisters we only want what's best so sometimes i come down REALLY hard on them!!! things have been easing up since i've been seeing that they're taking my advice but my point is, your sister loves you and wants only what's best and i'm glad you see that! :) this read like something my babii`sister would write for me! :) you br...
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