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"YOUR DEFINITION...."
  by LADY HYPNOTIC
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Now Dats Wat I Call Rap by Da'Mon aka D-Nice


*YO YALL SHOULD READ DA'MON'S POEM BEFORE YOU READ MINES...OTHERWISE U WOULDN'T REALLY UNDERSTAND IT..BUT UMM I THINK ITZ LIKE OUR THOUGHTZ MIXED UP KINDA IN THIS ONE...AND IF U DONT GET IT..THEN ITZ W/E..CUZ IM WRITIN IT FOR ME ANYWAY...*
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HOW CAN SOMEONE HATE LOVE WITH A PASSION?
HOW CAN U NOT CARE WHEN YOUR SUPPOSED TO HAVE COMPASSION?
WHY DO WE BECOME WEAK WHEN WE SHOULD STAY STRONG?
WHY DO WE LIVE OUR LIFE JUST TO PROVE SOMEONE ELSE WRONG?
RIGHT NOW YOU PROBABLY THINKIN "DAMN WATZ WITH ALL THE QUESTIONS?"
THEY NEED TO BE ANSWERED....CANT YOU THINK OF IT AS MY SUGGESTIONS?
WHY SHOULD WE JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER?
WHY NOT GIVE SOMEONE EVERYTHING WHEN THEY COULD BE YA LOVER?
PEOPLE GO THRU A LOT...DONT WE ALL HAVE STRUGGLES AND PROBLEMS?
BUT WE CANT SEEM TO FIND A SOLUTION SO WE ASK "WHO CAN SOLVE EM?"
ISNT IT STRANGE THAT PEOPLE CONNECT?....ITZ KINDA LIKE WE LINK
BUT YOU PROBABLY READIN THIS LIKE "FUCK WATEVA U THINK"
SO WHY AM I STILL WRITIN THIS?....IF DATZ THA WAY ITZ GONNA BE
IS IT BECAUSE I WANT U TO TAKE A LOOK THRU MY EYES AND SEE WHAT I SEE?
WELL...DATZ THA REASON WHY I WRITE POETRY
BUT TO BE MORE SPECIFIC I JUST DO IT FOR ME....
SOME PEOPLE BECOME SUCCESSFUL WITHOUT AN EDUCATION
SO WHY DO YA BEST JUS TO GET THRU TO GRADUATION?
LIFE IS HARD...IM SURE YOU'VE HEARD THAT BEFORE
IT ISNT PLANNED OUT SO WE NEVER KNO WATZ IN STORE
AND SOMETIMES PEOPLE WONDER "WHAT AM I LIVIN FOR?"....
BUT IF YOU WEREN'T MEANT TO BE HERE THEN U'LL ALREADY BE DEAD
YEAH....I THINK THATZ ALL DAT HAS TO BE SAID...
SO WHETHER U TALK ABOUT JEWELZ...CARZ...STRUGGLES OR CRAP
IT DOESNT MATTER....CUZ DATZ YOUR DEFINITION OF RAP....
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Date Submitted: May 19, 2007 (01:58 PM)
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  *CINDY*
05/29/07 (12:38 PM) 
i feel you..u went kinda deep on this one..but its definitely a fav!

  Jonathan Robin...
05/23/07 (04:13 PM) 
This is absolutely incredible. Those are some very solid questions and honestly, those are answers based on personal decisions made by how he chooses for his life to be. Great job--10 stars

  Doughboy
05/22/07 (02:09 PM) 
Damn... Lady H, You laid this shit str8 out on the table... You flow is always on point!!! You came hard with it I like it!! Yo... it can't get no real than this!! love the whole concept and the word play!!! Got to fav this!!

  Nikkz iZ DONE....
05/19/07 (06:54 PM) 
Snap Snap...mutha fuckiin Snap...siis thiis was a niice ass response fa real...glad ii diid read hiis fiirst cuz mah slow ass woulda been liike...((UhhZ???))...but siis thiis shiit go hard fa daiiz...yooh awreadii know...iif ii wasnt iin a fucked up mood ii'a do a response ta thiis one...ii miight...very niicely done Ronna

  real2da_end
05/19/07 (04:31 PM) 
the truth has just been told (lol) nah but str8 up you really said it and i did read DaMon's poem first so it did make a lot of sense and both of ya did a hella good job...and thas what its all about...it cant get realer than this and it s a fav..once again good job..and thanks for letten me read it...10 starz

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