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"Your Eyes: Dedication Lil Mj"
  by B. Rose


Even though you opened them
For only a short amount of time... Lol
The very first time I looked into your eyes...

I fell in love with you...

Shoot,
I was already in love with you
Before you exited your mother's womb

But now
That feeling has amplified to a number
Nobody's mental can consume

Those eyes
Those eyes

Make me smile wide
Without intention to subside
As long they are in a deep connection with yours..

My babyboy
When I look into your eyes
All I see is a new life
That is going to live to his fullest potential...

And I'm going to give you and your sister
All the love I can give you...

You bring me joy
And fill me with pride

My beautiful babyboy
I love looking into your eyes...
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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2009 (12:48 AM)
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  big josh
10/10/09 (07:07 PM) 
yo your truly a dedicated father my broter

  A L I E N
09/10/09 (08:36 PM) 
AWWWWW I LOVE THIS POEM..CONGRATZ ON LIL MAN...HE IS SOOO CUTE...INSTANT FAV...SO SWEET 10 PLUS

  MizDuval
09/06/09 (12:42 PM) 
b.rose this was absolutely BBEAUTIFUL....it just brings me joy to see a father care so much about his children...i love this dedication...my heart and blessing goes out to u and ur family....this is a fav on my list

  u know
09/06/09 (02:29 AM) 
aww... that is so sweet this so heart touching i agree beautiful indeed congrats

  J3LLYB3AN
09/03/09 (05:43 PM) 
thiis is way too freakin' sweet hun. i stay by what i've said before your going to be an excellent father indeed

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