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"Your Heart"
  by angeleyes1


With all your love,
How you make my heart melt,
I'll take your heart now,
Never forgetting how I felt,

Forever in my life,
Your heart I will always know,
So as you take me today,
Our love will continue to grow,

I'm in love with you,
Your heart commands my respect,
Your heart is granted to me,
With our love we will reflect,

The voices in your heart,
Whisper in my head,
Passing messages filled with love,
As I lay here listening on my bed,

I have fantasized about this moment,
Now only I can see,
Being lost in your love forever,
Close enough to hear your heart beat for me,

With your heart,
I feel relaxed and unwind,
I listen as your heart gently beats,
Now I leave my cares behind,

So today I accept your heart,
As a part of my life,
And I'll ask you now,
Can I be your loving wife?




copyright 2007

sandra c serfass


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Date Submitted: Jun 26, 2007 (09:20 PM)
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  lazyme35
10/23/09 (09:04 AM) 
simply a beautiful poem full of dedicated emotion for the one you love. you sure expressed it in such a lovely way. loved it

  1Heart4JC
09/19/09 (03:32 PM) 
I want to say this one...BEAU_TI_FUL!!!! Congrats on your poem being published in 2007 in your own name!!! I take this one to be my another favorite because it speaks to me in every word after all I was heartbroken in the pasts. Thanks for that enlightment! Love you, GF!

  Tuck
09/15/09 (10:55 PM) 
I see you angeleyes still spitin that eitha lol na I loved this rite here...keep it up ma

  G.A.
09/04/09 (04:22 PM) 
as i was readin this it just drew me in more n more into this n it did have me hooked on the poem more i that i've read... only thing about the poem i aint like was it had an ending n i wished it would've kept on goin cuz thats how much i enjoyed it... beautifully written

  cocoadiva
08/29/09 (10:29 AM) 
loved this.. filled with such emotion, love, and sincerity... great write... 10s and a fav

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