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"Your love was the oven that roasted my heart(area 25 title challenge)"
  by ButterflyDream


Human need gives me the right be loved,so I gave my heart to you
Compelled to follow the destiny love was pulling me to
No worries of looking like a fool,cause love completes
Emotions are too complicated for pride to compete
I mean why make a list of qualities if feelings are short
Paper logic,love the fates quickly abort
So i made the choice to let my heart speak
Let it test out different rhythms untill it finds just the right beat
No,not talking bed sheets
That horizontal high of lust
Electric currants shooting from your fingertips leaving the crash and burn of a sugar rush
Im speaking of something more wholesome...power lunch filling
Offered this to you,but your eating habits nearly killed me
Like oil and water we never seem to mix
I make love with my heart,you screw with your dick
Still youre a hard habit to kick,and youre still feeling my affects
So, here we stand in the warfare love begat
Vanity and pride blundering your way
still I stay
Seasons meant for me to grow with the day
Plus the sun's in my way
Blinding my site with love
And you bring peace to my spirit like the heavens above
The answer's not complicated,to this love I must be true
Open up your mind and see life's too short to be blue
Still soaring on the wings that flew me in your direction
Thats why Im steadying the mirror hoping that you"ll catch your reflection
But you"re too busy filling up on the nourishment of superficial needs
Still I"ll be here as long as love bleeds
Woke up today and noticed my heart was black
Charred and crispy from the high altitude oven,of your love rack
Wanted the warmth of your soul ,but my heart you over cooked
So I packed my bags cause love's now covered in soot








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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (10:36 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/02/09 (10:42 AM)
Author: Group: AREA 25
Poem Title: Your Heart was the o...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  YoungJukeHead
11/14/09 (12:03 AM) 
this is a really great write, keep doing what excites beautiful, this is worth 1000...ONe LOVe

  Psychosis Aka ...
11/12/09 (06:45 PM) 
you pen is wicked my dear this was hot !

  Pink Diamond10...
11/12/09 (12:37 AM) 
let it test out different rythms until it finds just the right beat! this poem is so lovely, so is the music and the layout! keep it up!

  ManOfGod14
11/10/09 (02:41 PM) 
This is an excellent poetic presentation! Great word usage and flow!! You are an incredible gift!! Keep it flowing!!

  (Floetic~One) ...
11/06/09 (12:27 AM) 
you delivered this wonderfully... great ink! and your presentation iz alwayz tight too

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