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"YOUR MIND"
  by blacknsexyjuice69


YOUR MIND


If I had your mind
our hearts would entwine
the space of time
our love will not decline.


If I had your mind
our inner peace
could not be blind
leaving the cold place behind.

If I had your mind
our bodies would relax
and my soul would recline
touching the inward part
and the very depth of my heart.

If I had your mind.
I would taste you like
the newness of old wine
sipping slowly on
the nectar of your vine

If I had your mind
we would forever
clasp together forgetting
about the vast measure of time.

Written by:JOYCE ANN Turner
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (12:29 AM)
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  TeachersPet
07/28/08 (08:19 PM) 
Lovely piece. It shows your deep thought process. Caring and nurturing nature.

  jdbrown
07/28/08 (12:42 AM) 
this was a pretty good write, very heart felt

  MrsShakur1
07/23/08 (01:46 AM) 
This poem is so Beautiful, so sensual and heartfelt. And i truly love the passion that lies within, and i can tell that you love from the depths and you want the same in return because you know what real love is. Anyway, keep the good work up because this was truly an invitin' piece. 10stars...

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