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"Your Right"
  by Young Street Poet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Patience by mz_April


You know, I guess you're right
I've been lied to a lot so I don't need Lucifer's lies
He uses things to trick us and blind us from the goal
He had my hope constantly plummeting, like firemen do poles
I appreciate the counseling that you're giving me
I guess you're a start as for blessings in disguise, you're a gift to me
So I'm going to relax a little and think on what you've said
Thanks for listening to me and not judging me instead
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (05:45 PM)
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  WIZ
10/07/08 (01:37 PM) 
GREAT RESPONSE AND IT FLOWS OFF THE CHAIN, TIGHT YOU RULE! OH, AND HOW'S YOUR DAY GOING? SMILES!

  poetrys peace
10/07/08 (05:03 AM) 
VERY NICE POEM RESPONSE!

  ash_g
10/06/08 (10:27 PM) 
=)

  coOkiefbby
10/06/08 (07:18 PM) 
super cute i love it 10. (:

  mz_April
10/06/08 (05:47 PM) 
i'm really not a judgmental person and I'll always take the time to listen to people i care fors problems and try to help them out. love you babe 10 starzz

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