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"You're All I need ....."
  by Mz Sick Prose
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Defined by One
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You’re…
All I need
Kind
Of
Like
The air I breathe
Ummmm..
Nah
Scratch …
That’s….
Too cliché
You see ……
You’re more like the
Symphonies melodically composing metaphorical masterpieces
Scattered sheet music glued together by my lip gloss on your cheeks
I always liked it when you smiled at me…. Like….
You….
Knew
You
Were
All I need
You be
Cocky
Yet ingeniously humble
As miraculous as Jesus trickery
Water into winery
We
Wind down
To some
Amy Winehouse
While re-hab-bing
….cause we hav-ing….
Some …
Trouble getting over each other…
Addicted to 12 stepping….. with ……you as my sponsor
Gotz-tah……
call ya when I’m slipping …
tripping on my lust …
I think I’m falling in love
Oops…
Let me check that….
Cause love is only a few minutes away from hate
And ….
I…
would hate to debate on whether I’m tough loving it
Or loving it rough ….
Heaven can not compare…..
To the way I swear ……
I walk on clouds
When I’m with you
Yet you
Burn me passionately
Like this… Was…. hell …..On… earth
And so I question my religion
Is this a Godly Feeling?
Or am I devilishly sinning
Either way…
You’re all I need
and
I
Walk through life …in a blind like trance
Touch you constantly Brail-like sex
We can’t communicate if we don’t touch
Perfecting lyrics to already great songz
Because all that was missing
Was
Me
And
You…
World-wide
Incorporating US into U-S-A
Girlz be
Jealous-like
Wishing-like
You were-like
Interested in mind-less
Conversations
When…
I’m ….
All…
You…
Need…
I Love
That
You’re so Mind-ful..of..
Our…
Conver-relationz…including all punctuationz…into our sexual interpretationz of our Karma-Sutra-ations
Our Elation is in eachother’s mental stimulationz and as long as my heartz racin
You
Are
All
I
Need

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Date Submitted: Feb 03, 2008 (02:38 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/23/08 (12:38 AM)
Author: nywizdom
Poem Title: You're All I Need (w...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  DaddysGirl
12/01/08 (11:46 AM) 
"Heaven can not compare to the way I swear I walk on clouds when I'm with you"... hmmm- what a feeling! I love this. This is the quality of love that makes one feel all warm & tingly inside- beautiful scribe!

  Shadow
05/13/08 (07:39 PM) 
you left me over here smiling. this was such a beautiful right mama. so much i could quote from here but then i would be quoting almost the whole write, lol. from one who is currently in love *smiles* this was *smiles even bigger* heartwarming.

  B. Rose
02/03/08 (01:56 PM) 
I gots to agree that was very daring... how you kinda included your own kinda vocab.... this was hot and very smooth flowing yo...

  WrItN4aPurpse
02/03/08 (09:48 AM) 
mmmm...very daring. You chose a hell of a poet to respond to (one) LOL but aye, this was hott...u definately did ur thing hun. Not mad atcha at all!!! Lovin ur flow and the passion put into this write!!! Keep ur pen movin hun! u get all my starz for this write=)

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