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"You're All I Need (w/audio)"
  by nywizdom
  - This Poem is a response to the poem You're All I need ..... by Mz Sick Prose



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You’re
All
I
Need
Kind of like how
water depends on
hydrogen and oxygen molecules
Cuz together we so cool,
but we know how to heat it up
til the point where we bout to vaporize
And you give me paper eyes
Cuz I observe your curves as words
And letters outline your graces
While beautiful poetic phrases
Replaces where your face is
And its
Got me feeling like I’m in the matrix
Cuz
Your
All
I
Need
Like Neo needing Trinity
And I’ll be your One
and only
Cuz I’m seeing we be
Having everybody moving in bullet time in my dreams
While hearing prophesies of me being your King
Like Nebuchadnezzar
And you know that I would never
Try to measure
The amount of pleasure you give me
Cuz I see that
Now and forever
It’s exactly
All
I
Need
Like my North Face during a NY winter
And since you hold me together
Like caulk to bathroom tiles
And you keep my happiness
Stocked like grocery store aisles
And for you I’d compile
Infinite SiMILIES
So that
“i” can step back
And see your SMILES
While a crescent is formed around your teeth
From the thickness of your lips
Making it look like the moon
And soon I need to
come like the sun
And create an eclipse
That’s so powerful that
Stars look down in envy
Creating an unsteady…
Balance in the universe
While we transverse the time and space continuum
Reverse the earth’s orbital rotation
Putting the whole solar system on pause
While we defy gravity’s laws
But its ok cuz its for a good cause indeed
Since
Like the 10 pints of blood in my body
You’re
All
I
Need
And you got me
Sneezing, and…
Coughing, and…
Wheezing, and…
Poppin’ lozenges
So I suppose something’s been transmitted
Since your prose are so sick wit it
But since you got the prescription
And medication
You’re
All
I
Need
And it’s all good
And if I could
I would
get a seamstress
to stich this
statement
all along the bridges to heaven
which I step in
every time we sexin’
and I’m confessin’
that I’m on a cloud that is
seven levels above nine
as we wine
to Machel Montano’s
One Last Time
Which is fine wit me
As long as that last time
Last an eternity
Cuz you got me
Memorizing
How it feels inside when
You be riding
Providing a time
That’s mesmerizing
and hypnotizing
to my mind and
I’m finding it
Blinding
How binding
Our connection
Really be
And you got me on a high
That really should be more illegal than weed
But all the legalities our bond supersedes
Since I’ve finally did the deed
Of finding the one,
In you...
That is
All
I
Need

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Date Submitted: Feb 23, 2008 (12:38 AM)
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  SlimCutta
11/10/08 (02:36 PM) 
*Stands and Claps*...i dont know if i can even comment well enough on this..great write..and wonderful flow on how you put this together..the SIMILE and SMILE verse...i saw coming but it was still on point..Great write.

  Chelz or Wet
07/08/08 (11:23 PM) 
this was beautiful..... very very creative, and very powerful. i like it, i feel all tha lines, i actually feel that way about someone too! =], its nice right, to finalyl find that perfect person for you. well thsi poem was off tha chain, so many favorite stanzas that if i wrote them on a comment i'd prolly end up re writin your poem asa comment, haha.. it was beautiful. definatly a favorite, and u got my 10stars on it!

  --->ROXIE<---
05/12/08 (08:52 PM) 
WIZ...ANYTHING U WRITE ABOUT COMES ACROSS WITH PRECISION...AND THIS AUDIO WAS HOT 2...U SEEM REAL CALM UNLIKE SOME OF UR PERFORMANCES WHERE IT SEEMS LIKE NERVOUSNESS HAS U TALKIN A LIL BIT FAST...LOL...SHIT U BETTER THAN ME...I DONT THINK I COULD EVER PERFORM....GOOD SHIT

  shyeboogie
05/06/08 (04:05 AM) 
damn poet...damn lol ur i'm not him piece was one the first pieces i read when i first joined this site and another great write i've read ....love the line "so i can step back and see u smile" ingenioius

  DaRk KnIgHt
04/03/08 (12:11 PM) 
SMOOTH EXECUTION AS EVER WIZ.. YOU JUS BLOW IT AWAY EVERYTIME.. I REMEMBER BACK WHEN I FIRST CAME ON TO DIS SITE..YOU WERE MY INSPIRATION.. AND FOR DAT MATTER YOU STILL ARE.. IT IS REFRESHING COMMING BACK THRU...YOU JUS SO REAL, SO DEEP.. TANXS ONCE AGAIN... DIS IS INDEED OF DA CHAIN...

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