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"You've got it all"
  by drybaggij


Butterfly (From The Casa Nova Sessions) - Jason Mraz

Your metamorphosis
was long winded
but listen to this
as you emerged
from your cocoon
a moment too soon
falling over your own wings
to witness the the trappings
of a head overflowing
full well knowing
as you perched yourself on the shoulder of this goon
a little too soon
I got bad choices
and karma
for a life living fast
brewing
pursuing
retribution

and as we strengthen us
fusing us
taking me and fastening your trust
lust
and all the other parts of you
I'd like it all
as discussed
and if I should go missing
and you missing this kissing
all you need do is call
My butterfly...

You've got it all.

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Date Submitted: Dec 27, 2008 (06:19 AM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
12/29/08 (10:39 AM) 
omgggg!!! this has got to be one of the best joints i have read by u...got damn...left me wit my mouth wide open...so fuckin beautifully penned J....wtf!! "as you perched yourself on the shoulder of this goon a little too soon I got bad choices and karma for a life living fast brewing pursuing retribution" <---i love the fuck outta that....

  KGgg
12/27/08 (08:12 PM) 
A Beautiful Piece....I Agree With Raw R.. Above me on this

  *~Raw Sensuali...
12/27/08 (08:04 PM) 
Trippin over your own wings.... wow... now that's a visual...and damn... I think I've done it... this is my fave though: "If I should go missing and you missing this kissing...all you need do is call My Butterfly"...that is simply beautiful...bravo

  bbeauty
12/27/08 (04:09 PM) 
THIS WAS CREATIVE......I THINK A BUTTERFLY UNDERGOES FIVE STAGES AND ALL THE STAGES AREN'T PRETTY BUT THE END RESULTS......IS WORTH WAITING FOR..........I LIKE THIS WRITE....B BLESS

  Sum-Thyng Like...
12/27/08 (01:32 PM) 
this was sweet

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